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25-08-2021, 03:49 AM
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In Your Eyes
In your eyes, I see hid/den glory ...8syls
In my eyes I see you..6syls
Laughing at the way we move around...8syls
Eye for an eye we dance...6syls
Lust and love es/caping..6syls
Let it go on the wind...6syls
Life is so big and small...6syls
I looked
In your eyes
syl·la·ble
/ˈsiləb(ə)l/
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noun
a unit of pronunciation having one vowel sound, with or without surrounding consonants, forming the whole or a part of a word; e.g., there are two syllables in water and three in inferno.
verb
Peace... always.
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25-08-2021, 03:59 AM
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Jesus Saves
Lord of the star/fields heav/ens glory...8syl
Gives way to our soul's story...6syl
Jesus walked on dirty wat/ers 8syl
For the sake of dis/orders... 6 syl
He with/stood the cur/rents...6syl
As the de/vil churned deep...6syl
Within depts of tor/rents...6syl
Jesus saves
The drowning
Some small edits... Lol.
Corrections always welcomed.
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25-08-2021, 04:21 AM
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Quietus poetry form
First stanza is a quatrain with 8-6-8-6 syllable count in end rhyme abab +
Followed by 6-6-6 syllable count tercet, end rhyme ccc +
Concluded by an equal syllable count rhyming couplet using refrain from first line, as the last line of the poem
The refrain is also the poem title
Syllable counts can be tricky. Use the poetrysoup.com syllable counter to check
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The heartbeat of God is agape love & living light
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25-08-2021, 04:26 AM
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Head melds with heart
Head melds with heart, ushering calm
Poised thus in alignment
Bliss mist applies its healing balm
Soul rests in contentment
The way is surrender
Beholding Gods wonder
No hearts stand asunder
Erst fears depart
Head melds with heart
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25-08-2021, 05:13 AM
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Yes I’m coming in now to get picky with nowayout.. hehe
Your first stanza looks slightly off me thinks ..
‘In your eyes I see hidden glory’”- in my eyes I see 9 syl’s.
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The universe is made up of experiences that are designed to burn out your attachment, your clinging, to pleasure, to pain, to fear, to all of it. And as long as there is a place where you’re vulnerable, the universe will find a way to confront you with it. - Ram Dass
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25-08-2021, 02:19 PM
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Poets at work
Poets at work, soul search for rhythm
Sacred geometry
At play within mind-body prism
In continuity
As love for love does long
The koel sings it song
Carrying all along
Passion’s quirk
Poets at work
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25-08-2021, 02:20 PM
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Our ugly side
Our ugly side, anger and greed
Game of one-upmanship
Endless craving beyond our need
Gods love not our flagship
At all costs need to win
Deafened by ego din
Delusion begets sin
Ego lust ride
Our ugly side
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26-08-2021, 02:34 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by JustBe
Yes I’m coming in now to get picky with nowayout.. hehe
Your first stanza looks slightly off me thinks ..
‘In your eyes I see hidden glory’”- in my eyes I see 9 syl’s.
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Well then elaborate?
In your eyes I see hid/den Glo/ry???
Ok then... In eyes I see hidden Glory...
God help us to see!
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26-08-2021, 02:37 AM
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What are fears
What are fears - attachment to form
Our soul not organic
Fleeting is destiny spawned storm
Reclaim joy ecstatic
Why we choose to suffer
Rather than bliss caper
Is because of stupor
Ask heart’s tears
What are fears
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26-08-2021, 02:38 AM
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Love empowers
Love empowers both heart and mind
Miracles manifest
No trace remains of ego bind
Love infallible litmus test
No longer weigh and size
As we welcome surprise
Delighting in bliss rise
Presence towers
Love empowers
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