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Old 04-10-2018, 03:29 AM
weareunity weareunity is offline
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Lost

The child took the bowl
To the door of the slyly grinning.
Help me-the child cried,
And another cried inside,
Answering-I cannot,
For I am lost
In the house of the winning.
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Old 04-10-2018, 01:42 PM
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I can see this in feelings, weareunity. So very, very true. "Lost in the house of the winning" (supersonic clarity, there) makes me also think of how drama wins attention- and our presence in it is whether the drama wins something of us.
Your poem expands its metaphors so well. I am appreciation!!
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Old 04-10-2018, 05:41 PM
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Hello Starflower. Thanks muchly for your appreciation. Good wishes. pete
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Old 05-10-2018, 01:43 AM
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hi pete,

hope you don't mind, I liked your closing lines so much I borrowed them for a post. I thought they were really great!
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Old 05-10-2018, 02:47 AM
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Beautiful & relevant :)
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Old 06-10-2018, 07:53 AM
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Hello Falling Leaves and Unseeking Seeker and all.

The simple words came rapidly to mind --(this time), thinking through a window of thoughts and feelings shared by many of us. Thinking that this sharing of thoughts and feelings is paramount with all sorts of acts, words, etc. an expression of that shared flowing, and that flow lets go. Processing not possessing.
So, bon voyage to all our boats of expression, carrying our shared thoughts and feelings, with sails filled with the breeze of empathic yet often unspoken voices. cheers. pete
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Old 06-10-2018, 02:15 PM
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Hello Falling Leaves and Unseeking Seeker and all.

The simple words came rapidly to mind --(this time), thinking through a window of thoughts and feelings shared by many of us. Thinking that this sharing of thoughts and feelings is paramount with all sorts of acts, words, etc. an expression of that shared flowing, and that flow lets go. Processing not possessing.
So, bon voyage to all our boats of expression, carrying our shared thoughts and feelings, with sails filled with the breeze of empathic yet often unspoken voices. cheers. pete

What a great picture window you open in words, peteofunity. Bon Voyage to all of the many we are in our chosen spacious metaphors. Processing beyond separating and controlling. The silence inside is full of grace and good wishes, dreams and flowering arts. Yes!
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Old 10-10-2018, 11:31 AM
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very beautiful
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