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Old 04-11-2016, 03:44 AM
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(Because they say not all who wander are lost)

Freedom is lonely
laughter is my special song
Time heals, flowing slowly
Especially when I'm alone

smell angel's breath around my neck
the sky is breaking low again
but I'm high, and orbiting
some where beyond eternity
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Old 04-11-2016, 07:30 AM
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(Because they say not all who wander are lost)

Freedom is lonely
laughter is my special song
Time heals, flowing slowly
Especially when I'm alone

I like that
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Old 04-11-2016, 04:10 PM
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I like that

Thank you! It does flow better than the second stanza, which I rushed lol
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Old 04-11-2016, 06:11 PM
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"laughter is my special song"

This is a lovely read, Solarian! I resonate with the freedom of being happy and cherished, alone and not lonely.
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Old 04-11-2016, 06:13 PM
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"laughter is my special song"

This is a lovely read, Solarian! I resonate with the freedom of being happy and cherished, alone and not lonely.

Thank you Starflower
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Old 29-12-2016, 02:56 PM
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i'm always to nowhere compared to her

she's perfect
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Old 02-01-2017, 09:47 AM
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What a beautiful poem. Is that your picture as your forum avatar? If so it is beyond awesome that a person so young has such an expansive view of proportion (e.g. "but I'm high, and orbiting some where beyond eternity"). At the risk of sounding impudent I can but suggest to always keep writing, no matter what. That is the most effective way of breaking down barriers to your means of expression. Also, a poet's vocabulary is like a painter's color palette, make it grow and grow.

Peace to you.
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Old 10-01-2017, 07:54 PM
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Lovely cadence and rhythm, the words have a great musicality :)
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