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Old 30-05-2012, 04:13 PM
hawkmoth65
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Wasteland

I posted this on a poetry forum today...

Splinter now,my wooden heart,
the saw-mills have been hungry,
I linger desolate,apart,
in a climax of butchery.

On the sap-drenched forest floor,
the shattered limbs surround me,
multitudes of friends that bore,
the brunt of a chainsaw's glee.

Happenstance I remain for now,
alone in a birdless void,
age and wisdom in each bough,
by men in a day destroyed.

May 2012
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Old 30-05-2012, 05:43 PM
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Wow !! i love it !! Great work hawkmoth !! I love the line, "Happenstance I remain for now, alone in a birdless void ..." Lots of feeling. Really good.
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Old 31-05-2012, 09:12 PM
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Thank you Liza,to be honest I was a little nervous about posting it on that forum.
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