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Old 20-09-2012, 03:22 PM
krisam
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To my Husband

Carry on your tantrums and little hissy fits,
I really do not care no more... I could not give a S***

If moaning makes you happy then carry on forever,
A promise to myself this day... you will upset me never.

Your comments used to make me cry, but now they make me sad...
because I really know the truth... its YOU not me that's bad.
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Old 20-09-2012, 05:16 PM
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Hey Krisam


Its a short poem with a lot of emmotion in it,


Namaste
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Old 20-09-2012, 07:47 PM
Nada
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Oh
LOL....
By the title, I thought that it was going to be a romantic and or appreciative poem.
How wrong I was.
This is a good idea to vent. I have to try this for myself.
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Old 22-09-2012, 01:32 PM
silent whisper
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Oh
LOL....
By the title, I thought that it was going to be a romantic and or appreciative poem.
How wrong I was.
This is a good idea to vent. I have to try this for myself.


Two great minds think alike...and get it wrong...
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Old 20-09-2012, 08:46 PM
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LOL, I know where you're coming from krisam x
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Old 20-09-2012, 11:21 PM
Wisa'ka
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"I could not give a S***"

Soup ?
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Old 21-09-2012, 04:07 AM
Rin
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Wisa'ka
"I could not give a S***"

Soup ?
LOL, it rhymes with fit. But you know that, don't you?

The first line shouldn't use the plural.
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Old 21-09-2012, 11:33 AM
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I like the poem very much.
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Radiate boundless love towards the entire world ~ Buddha
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Old 22-09-2012, 01:23 PM
Wisa'ka
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LOL, it rhymes with fit. But you know that, don't you?

The first line shouldn't use the plural.

I imagine some soups taste rather s#!tty just as some s#!t is rather soupy.

Marriage, the good times and the bad times. The regular and and not so regular.
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Old 21-09-2012, 03:11 AM
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Thumbs up

You two maybe have some things to work through. I look forward to when you write more happy poetry! :)
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