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Old 02-02-2014, 05:48 AM
TheAshCooper
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Though the destination is unclear our journey already begun

Lately,
Tell me girl?
If you think,
I'll change the world?

I know you know, what I'm thinking about;

So tell me,
Are you real?
And tell me,
How to feel,
This fire burns brighter, next to you ;

No wonder when I'm alone, I'm lost and confused ;

Cause you make me,
Want to be a better man,
Yeah you make me,
Need to be a better man,
I've got to be a better man;

So can we linger here?
A little while longer,
You said the pain the fear, would make us both stronger,
I still taste your kiss, as I feel your flesh,
As the icing drips, cheeks, breasts;

You make me want to be a better man.
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Old 02-02-2014, 09:46 PM
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There is a lovely track by pearl jam called betterman, have a listen :)
:)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2JmNLeXKNtI
Loopy :)
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Old 03-02-2014, 10:50 AM
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I hate it when my ideas don't seem original.
Pearl jam are epic though.
Acoustic was best.
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Old 03-02-2014, 11:19 AM
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Originally Posted by TheAshCooper
I hate it when my ideas don't seem original.
Pearl jam are epic though.
Acoustic was best.

Lol awww, are any ideas original really?? Or just pulled deep from the ether, and hugged by our interpretations!
And yeps they are epic!!! Its a compliment to be compared surely hehehe!
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Old 04-02-2014, 11:03 AM
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It is flattering also.
My friend said to me yesterday after analysing my music properly for the first time. That people would be running English classes around my wordplay in the future cause the complexity of subliminal statements I seem to put in. ****.

I'm still bathing that one in. XD

THANKS.
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