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Old 31-05-2022, 07:44 PM
Joe Mc Joe Mc is offline
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Something I scribbled down this morning outside a supermarket in my car
It's not finished but I liked the sound of the words.


Following an invisible line
Down silky shades and sunken eyes
The destiny you never had
Armoured nomenclature
Something that won't rhyme

High praises to a Goddess
And the wind
The rippled faces of unfinished things
Of work that will see you out
And the world staging
it's field of death
It's dreaming still and now
and then
A crossed field with no way back

Collaborators one and all
Raised hands or the wall
Raised voices in the bristling bar
Sea worthy revellers
Drunken tomorrows

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Old 01-06-2022, 01:14 AM
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That sucks..


In a fabulous away. Haha

It’s good penmanship to boot!
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Old 01-06-2022, 05:22 AM
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That sucks..


In a fabulous away. Haha

It’s good penmanship to boot!

hahaha Thank you ! It's kinda a bit bob dylanny but
not really dylansque lol .. i had just read a little article
concerning Bob Dylan's influence upon the Beatles, particularly
upon John Lennon. It may have hit the spot.

The sentiment that was floating inside my little mind was how
things are never going to be finished, projects in your life, they
just won't, it's part of the trip, or if they are finished, the quile
or omphhhhh that brought these projects to life, has somehow disappeared
and the sum parts don't quite add up to the outcome you seemed to long for.

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