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24-08-2021, 05:25 AM
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Originally Posted by Unseeking Seeker
JustBe … do a syllable check!
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Your like the most annoyingly persistent and kind grade six teacher who’s determined to get her pupils across the line for the next big step in life..lol
Far out!
Your onto it.
I can’t believe I did it again!
Ok..copy paste fix it this time!
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24-08-2021, 05:29 AM
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Sticking to the format with heart
Amazing how your brain
Will twist it’s own domain and spark
Yet it’s all good retrain
An upside down
Round and a round
Prose will be found
Gets me through
Sticking to...
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Free from all thought of “I” and “mine”, that man finds utter peace. ~Bhagavad Gita
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24-08-2021, 06:42 AM
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Ah, alas, the tercet must have 6 syllables per line :)
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24-08-2021, 06:44 AM
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Maya veil
Maya veil that conceals our light
Our souls limitation
Presence yet discerns wrong from right
Choosing love vibration
Granted on earth, free will
Each impulse we distil
Till bliss does overspill
Holy grail
Maya veil
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24-08-2021, 08:03 AM
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Master
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Originally Posted by Unseeking Seeker
Maya veil that conceals our light
Till bliss does overspill
Maya veil
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I’m very close to calling your first line as lacking one syllable
But then I thought he is safe!
I’m now trying to call you out as to not own my errors..haha
Seriously I’m going for it again..watch me!
Stillness be all encompassing
Sunset igniting pink
My heart sinks into love pumping
Joyous love, nature’s wink
Darkened clouds cannot woe
This moment all aglow
Creation As she sows
Can you see
Stillness be
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Free from all thought of “I” and “mine”, that man finds utter peace. ~Bhagavad Gita
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24-08-2021, 11:01 AM
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@ JustBe … (thunderous applause)
I check syllable count on poetrysoup.com, so am unlikely to err
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24-08-2021, 11:32 AM
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Omg your such a legend dedicated to my cause.. haha
(You cheat, I rack my brain��)
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Free from all thought of “I” and “mine”, that man finds utter peace. ~Bhagavad Gita
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24-08-2021, 12:52 PM
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Spoilt for choice
Spoilt for choice, engulfed by desire
We lose sense of balance
Fleeting goals for which we aspire
Corrupts our innocence
The welcome mat is laid
Bliss within is readymade
If ego goodbye bade
Lost our voice
Spoilt for choice
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25-08-2021, 02:09 AM
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Goalposts shift
Goalposts shift, as we chase rainbows
Bemused by our own mind
Moment to moment, hunger grows
Until with love aligned
Trauma bonding with lust
Choosing pathways unjust
Love reservoir goes bust
Soul adrift
Goalposts shift
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25-08-2021, 03:46 AM
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We rise if we choose
We rise if we choose, by free will
Becoming self-aware
Next, each thought, mindfully distil
Side stepping ego snare
Time stretched stillness, quiet
No ego spawned riot
Cravings on a diet
There is no excuse
We rise if we choose
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