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Old 23-08-2021, 04:39 AM
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JustBe Ö Perfecto! :)

Goody!

Our perfection takes diligence
With focus and practice
As co operation it serves
Our limitless being

We come into our own
We are never alone
Perfection dances one

In unison
Our perfection
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Old 23-08-2021, 04:42 AM
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Now all that’s left is first quatrain end rhyme abab :)
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Old 23-08-2021, 04:43 AM
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Now all thatís left is first quatrain end rhyme abab :)


What???

What have I missed this time?? Lol
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Old 23-08-2021, 04:43 AM
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Glisten


Glisten, begs our soul, itís dark here
Shed erst cravings savage
Let thunderous bliss, each pore spear
Drop ego spawned baggage

In stillness and silence
Spake voice of innocence
Dwell in luminescence

Listen
Glisten
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Old 23-08-2021, 04:45 AM
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What???

What have I missed this time?? Lol

End rhyme in first quatrain Ö alternate rhyming sequence a-b-a-b
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Old 23-08-2021, 04:46 AM
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Day and night


Day and night, God search our focus
Fears and desires recede
We waver not from love locus
Our will to divine cede

No secrets to ferret
Judge not fault or merit
Climbing to the summit

Bliss delight
Day and night
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Old 23-08-2021, 05:02 AM
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Jesus Saves

Lord of the starfields heavens glory
Gives way to our soul's story
Jesus walked on dirty waters
For the sake of our disorders

He did withstand the current
As the devil churned deep
Within depts of our torrent

Jesus saved
The drowning
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Old 23-08-2021, 05:17 AM
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@ Nowayout … beautiful! Not quite the format but who cares? Thanks for sharing!

Quietus form
First stanza is a quatrain 8-6-8-6 syllable in end rhyme abab +
Followed by 6-6-6 syllable tercet end rhyme ccc +
Concluded by an equal syllable couplet using refrain from first line, as last line of the poem
Refrain is also the poem title
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Old 23-08-2021, 05:21 AM
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Silent thunder


Silent thunder vibrates within
Each node of form aglow
Magnetic rapture does heighten
In tranquil stillness slow

Let love pulsations rise
Lower mind, vaporise
Divine soul, realise

Blissful wonder
Silent thunder
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Old 23-08-2021, 09:28 AM
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End rhyme in first quatrain Ö alternate rhyming sequence a-b-a-b


I seriously believed I had it.

Can you rewrite that last one I wrote so I can visually see again what Iíve missed.

Graciously thankful..
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