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Old 05-12-2021, 03:57 AM
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3 lines, 4 syllables each,
rhyme 1st line 4th syllable with
2nd line 3rd syllable with
3rd line 2nd syllable


Gives Haiku a run for its money, eh?
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Weve got to look at the syllables (not words) the 4th syllable of the 1st line it must be the same as the 3rd syllable of the second line as also 2nd syllable of third line.

This is a compact form but tricky
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We’ve got to look at the syllables (not words) … the 4th syllable of the 1st line … it must be the same as the 3rd syllable of the second line as also 2nd syllable of third line.

This is a compact form but tricky

Tricky, indeed. It tripped me up. :)

How about this?

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