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05-12-2021, 04:57 AM
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Than-Bauk
3 lines, 4 syllables each,
rhyme 1st line 4th syllable with
2nd line 3rd syllable with
3rd line 2nd syllable
Gives Haiku a run for its money, eh?
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05-12-2021, 04:58 AM
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Actor on stage
an old adage
world a stage strange
with age we know
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05-12-2021, 05:00 AM
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Fear is a blockage
bliss ignition
when we shun fear
bright sunlight here
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05-12-2021, 09:49 PM
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Jazz from the caves
Modern-day slaves
Dance chains away
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06-12-2021, 02:09 AM
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Originally Posted by Navenanthen
Jazz from the caves
Modern-day slaves
Dance chains away
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 We’ve got to look at the syllables (not words) … the 4th syllable of the 1st line … it must be the same as the 3rd syllable of the second line as also 2nd syllable of third line.
This is a compact form but tricky
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06-12-2021, 02:48 AM
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Where lies midpoint of rapture
we weigh and size
joy surprising
no wiser now
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06-12-2021, 04:32 PM
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How still is our stillness
graded silence
it’s fragrance love
we sense bliss throb
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06-12-2021, 04:34 PM
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Throttling love
when ego seeks
higher peaks here
love speaks no more
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06-12-2021, 08:48 PM
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Light beams through me
Some light tea now
Dreamed three dreams wow
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06-12-2021, 09:51 PM
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Originally Posted by Unseeking Seeker
We’ve got to look at the syllables (not words) … the 4th syllable of the 1st line … it must be the same as the 3rd syllable of the second line as also 2nd syllable of third line.
This is a compact form but tricky |
Tricky, indeed. It tripped me up. :)
How about this?
Jazz from the caves
Modern days slave
Dance chains away
Last edited by Navenanthen : 07-12-2021 at 01:16 AM.
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