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Old 24-11-2021, 03:43 PM
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QUIETUS POETRY FORM

For those who joined in late …

QUIETUS POETRY FORM

First stanza is a quatrain with 8-6-8-6 syllable count in end rhyme abab +

Followed by 6-6-6 syllable count tercet, end rhyme ccc +

Concluded by an equal syllable count rhyming couplet using refrain (any length as of poet’s choice) beginning with the first word (or words) of the first line, as the last line of the poem

The refrain (last line of poem) is also the poem title

Contributions welcome!

Note: Syllables are tricky, best to check with a program although programs too err. Popular ones are poetrysoup.com and howmanysyllables.com
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Feeble form sighs


Feeble form sighs, seeking desire
Devoid of memory
We then deludedly aspire
Egoic fame and glory

Heart oscillations sway
Endless lives we replay
As ego has it’s say

Through lows and highs
Feeble form sighs
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Old 25-11-2021, 02:09 AM
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Agendaless joy


Agendaless joy, bubbling bliss
We’re centred in the void
Vivifying divine caress
Glowing heart by love buoyed

In but not of the world
Soul in love cocoon curled
Boundless bliss thus unfurled

No need to be coy
Agendaless joy
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Old 25-11-2021, 02:35 AM
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Not of the world
But passing through

Through time
And space

Open wide
Bliss needs nothing

Except

Loves blushing brides.
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Old 25-11-2021, 03:59 AM
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Mind block


Mind block, a reminder gentle
We have no ownership
God shapes us, upon the mantle
Let’s make Him our flagship

Foiled doership does nonplus
We go where God takes us
Pointless is ego fuss

Huge shock
Mind block
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Old 25-11-2021, 04:02 AM
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What is bliss?

What is love?

Who is looking for edification?

Love is grounded

Bliss fleeting...

With all due respect

My friend.
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Old 25-11-2021, 04:08 AM
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What is bliss?

What is love?

Who cares...

Head melds with heart
Surrendering therein
Aligned with love
Which is God-energy
Layer by layer
Watch ego disappear
Mind-body shell
Our earth life vessel
In tranquil emptiness
Is filled with bliss in fullness
As magnetic electricity
Pulsates in continuity
Pervading our form
With ecstatic currents warm

Call it what we will
All voids within fill
God’s will does bliss instil

If we but allow

Give it any name
The energy is the same
Kundalini, Holy Spirit, grace
Until we see God … face to face

As for the bliss current
Here, now, within present
Once our central vein is ignited
The lamp of true love lighted
Bliss is felt through day and night
Ignition renewal, heart’s delight

In the earthy domain
Oscillating joy and pain
What is called love but a trade
Seeking reciprocation, lust man-made
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You caught my correction which is like the fleeting of time... what is love, I care!

Pointless and pointed.

Hugs and light...
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Old 25-11-2021, 04:22 AM
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It's just all this pulsating stuff...

It's so strange to me.
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Not strange at all, Nowayout. It is simple. Head (ego, doership) and heart (desire) are not aligned with Love. The love Christ consciousness embodies. Unconditional, all embracing, non-judgmental.

We must let go off, to get to, in a journey without movement. Thus, meld head with heart, abiding in thought rested silence. We become empty. Or we may say, cleansed, purified, purged. This emptiness is then filled by our own divinity as a bliss current. I liken it to magnetism. We can call it anything. Words are but symbols.

The cascading current like waves, fills us. Not instantly, since we offer resistance, owing to our conditioning, residual fears & desires. As we become acceptant, trusting the energy, it fills us. There is no limit. Each pore is a door.

As Legrand on SF, oft says, enjoy!
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