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Old 04-08-2023, 01:38 AM
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Old 06-08-2023, 10:46 AM
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Nice!

Haven´t read that much of your poems (i believe you have hundreds...or maybe much more?), but from what i have read i get the feeling you live and breathe words, rhyme and sometimes even form...? You get inspiration very easily?
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Nice!

Haven´t read that much of your poems (i believe you have hundreds...or maybe much more?), but from what i have read i get the feeling you live and breathe words, rhyme and sometimes even form...? You get inspiration very easily?

Thanks irisa ~ yes, thoughts come in as poetic vibrations mostly. I don’t know how it came about.

I picked up a few poetry forms from another site, poetrysoup.com. Before that, I had no idea about syllables count, exact vs near rhymes and other poetry tools. I still do not understand what iambic pentameter is, as also other nuances of soft vs hard words as end rhymes, apt use of alliteration, show vs tell subtleties etc and of course, compared to others, my vocabulary level is far lower.
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iambic pentameter?!...never heard of

How can you say your vocabulary level is far lower?

From what i´ve read till now my thought was actually that you have a pretty high level vocabulary..
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