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Old 21-04-2016, 12:43 AM
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Broken Glass

I wrote this in high school but from time to time I find it still kicking around in the brain parts.

I will no longer travel on broken glass,

I found my own happiness,

When my journey for yours ended.

I will no longer bleed for you,

or reopen healing wounds,

In search of what you are unable to find.

Yourself,

at the end,

of a never ending path,

of broken glass.
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Old 21-04-2016, 04:43 AM
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It would be a healthy thing if all broken relationships and hearts led to the insightful self loving-care attitude developed here. I like the progression and the layout. Very effective poem. Hahahahah... If I don't sound like a real critic. Now here comes the living, breathing emotion observer... The use of the path of broken glass at all and to begin and end, really punched this poem to super visual. Good one.
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Old 03-05-2016, 07:40 PM
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I am glad that you understood this life lesson at such a young age. Its something some people never seem to learn or apply.
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