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Old 12-07-2016, 08:45 AM
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Forgery

You rolled into my life like a smoky haze.
Your enchanting,
seductive,
intoxicating ways;
weaving through my hearts elaborate maze,

you became the affliction I succumbed to.

Your savory whispers,
tantalizing,
appetizing,
as I tremored under your tender touch.
Your wickedness,
exciting,
enticing,
as I relished in the essence of a haunting love.

Then, with sweating bodies,
rustling sheets,
blissful cries,
and racing heart beets,
you pounded my thighs,
looking me deep in the eyes,
and made promises you could never keep.

And it is for this truth my soul does weep.

For it wasn’t the barrier of my bed you broke,
but my heart,
mind,
and soul,
where the forgery of your love grows cold,
Shrouded in Darkness,
hardening into stone.
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Old 12-07-2016, 08:52 AM
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Awesome...

Wow 2Cents...What an awesome poem... Couldn't stop reading once I'd started...

It's a complete 'mind-blower'... And so 'soul-searching'...

Thank you for posting it...

Robbie....
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Old 13-07-2016, 10:43 PM
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Thanks. 😊

I was actually terrified to post it for the contents alone.

But a couple people told me I should anyway.
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Old 14-07-2016, 08:14 AM
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It is a great poem....lovely Cents :)
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Old 14-07-2016, 11:53 AM
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Content...

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Thanks. ��

I was actually terrified to post it for the contents alone.

But a couple people told me I should anyway.

Well 2cents... I would agree with them for the most part...

In poetic writing, I'm given to understand, that the terminology used, is viewed in a somewhat different light, to similar words or terms used in normal transcriptions... That is because they are obtained, from a different part of the mind, that needs to convey softer, true, loving sentiments and values, regarding feelings from within a special: emotive field...

So:- I would suggest that you continue to create and post all or any poetry that comes to mind, thus allowing us to enjoy the beautiful sentiments that your spirituaal mind wishes to convey...

Hope that's understandable to everyone... It's sometimes difficult to express one's thoughts regarding intricate subjects... Smile... But there is usually a way...

With respect...

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Old 14-07-2016, 07:32 PM
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Old 14-07-2016, 11:31 PM
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Nice work, my friend.

(Halfway through the 3rd para, almost dropped my kindlefire! ... "did she just say that?!? Yeah, she did."..lol)
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Old 15-07-2016, 12:35 AM
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Nice work, my friend.

(Halfway through the 3rd para, almost dropped my kindlefire! ... "did she just say that?!? Yeah, she did."..lol)

lmbo... sorry Liv!
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