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Old 10-11-2018, 03:40 AM
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The Day you ended yourself

My heart shattered
into thousand pieces
My mind became
as black as the night
My body sank
deep into the core
My spirit left
emptying me as shell
My whole died
along with you
My self blame
destroyed me
My destiny
kept its course
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Old 13-11-2018, 03:20 AM
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Happiness
In front
tempting me
Dazzling colors
Brilliant lights
Indescribable
A touch away
Maybe a step
I watch
Dancing waves
Just watching
Afraid
One move
It may disappear
Attainment
I may disappear
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Old 13-11-2018, 04:16 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Ziusudra
Happiness
In front
tempting me
Dazzling colors
Brilliant lights
Indescribable
A touch away
Maybe a step
I watch
Dancing waves
Just watching
Afraid
One move
It may disappear
Attainment
I may disappear

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Beautiful!

Words, symbolic, my interpretation of your lovely inspiration goes as follows:

Happiness
Within
Is me
Dazzling colors
Brilliant lights
Indescribable
A touch
Delicately, unhurriedly
I watch agendalessly
Dancing waves
Just watching
Becoming the wave
One move
It may disappear
To reappear!
Attainment, what is that?
Dissolved in the current
I too have disappeared!

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Old 13-11-2018, 05:02 AM
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Originally Posted by Unseeking Seeker
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Beautiful!

Words, symbolic, my interpretation of your lovely inspiration goes as follows:

Happiness
Within
Is me
Dazzling colors
Brilliant lights
Indescribable
A touch
Delicately, unhurriedly
I watch agendalessly
Dancing waves
Just watching
Becoming the wave
One move
It may disappear
To reappear!
Attainment, what is that?
Dissolved in the current
I too have disappeared!

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Nice,
Interesting how rearranging of few words changes the meaning and flow
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Old 21-11-2018, 01:43 PM
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Blessing

Oh...
It has been so long
Since my dad blessed me...
On his death bed...
I remember his precious last words
Whenever I need blessing
His words blossom in my heart and mind
Like beautiful flowers..

Oh...
How I wish to receive
Another blessing
From my dearest
With unconditional love
Just the pure sincerity
Blessing me to have a beautiful journey too..
Love, be loved, be healthy and be happy

Oh...
I hate to beg
But what can I do
I deserve a blessing
Please add prosperity as well..
This is what self-love is all about
Exchanging blessing..
You are happy, I am happy.
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Old 23-11-2018, 09:59 PM
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Let my unconditional blessings be a garland for your head and your spiritual robes be woven with warmth and light and look in the pockets, there is some money there..

All I want is just a little hug... anyone will do, I won't kill you.
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Old 24-11-2018, 01:54 AM
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Let my unconditional blessings be a garland for your head and your spiritual robes be woven with warmth and light and look in the pockets, there is some money there..

All I want is just a little hug... anyone will do, I won't kill you.

Oh... Thank you, Nowayout. That was very sweet blessings and nice of you for the money.

I am giving you a hug.
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Old 24-11-2018, 02:53 PM
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You truly put a smile on my face.

Peace, light, and thanks for the coffee..
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Old 24-11-2018, 05:28 PM
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Duck

Duck Duck Duck
Beautiful Duck
Where is it going
Where did it come from
Duck Duck Duck
Stunning Duck
What is it looking for
What adventure it seeks
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Old 24-11-2018, 05:36 PM
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Doors
So many
As I stand
At the doorway
Where I depart
So many new doors
Some with darkness
Mysterious
Evokes curiosity
More suspicious
Some with lightness
Blinding brightness
Hard to see through
Evokes suspicion
Doors doors doors
So many doors
Which door is my destiny
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