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Old 20-04-2019, 04:10 AM
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Tricky ... Haven’t got the hang of it yet ...

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Old 20-04-2019, 04:14 AM
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Serpent of desire
Encircles the heart
Breath flows but I choke

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Beautiful!
But miss the 7 on 2nd line.

This is hilarious!
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Old 20-04-2019, 04:20 AM
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Yes It is lots fun!
You are great with Haiku too
I like your Haiku!

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Wow! 5-7-5 in a single breath!

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Old 20-04-2019, 04:21 AM
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As metal moves out
The train of souls unburden
Their futures and pasts.
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Love and Light - and Life!

And we turn our attention to the world, not away. We receive our learning from the songs it sings and the choir of One we're all in.

And while we walk gently, we generate love, healing, the most powerful energy of all, Life!

Soaking in life, we spread the light <3
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Old 20-04-2019, 04:23 AM
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Beautiful!
But miss the 7 on 2nd line.

This is hilarious!

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How?

en-cir-cles has 3
The ... 1
Hea-rt ... 1

Ok ..l need 7

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Old 20-04-2019, 04:24 AM
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Wow! 5-7-5 in a single breath!

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I am getting hang of it. It is fun in a restricted way.
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Old 20-04-2019, 04:25 AM
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How?

en-cir-cles has 3
The ... 1
Hea-rt ... 1

Ok ..l need 7

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you can do it.
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Old 20-04-2019, 04:30 AM
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As metal moves out
The train of souls unburden
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Nice Haiku Realm
Five, Seven, Five, you got it!
This is fun for all
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Old 20-04-2019, 04:33 AM
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Serpent of desire
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Serpent of desire
Encircles the wobbling heart
Breath flows but I choke



I guess that fixes it!

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Old 20-04-2019, 04:50 AM
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Serpent of desire
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I guess that fixes it!

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