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Originally Posted by deyheaven1979
What I meant by that is for you to write another poem that's not so simple for me to figure it out. I won't make promises that I can't keep, specially since I'm not good at writing poems. :)
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ahh !!
well i can post a poem or something like that ;) try and guess thats it about :) and by the way, you'll get better once you start writing.. should have seen the first ones i wrote :P funny !!
anyway here it is...
It feels like being surrounded by darkness on a brightest day
when there are things inside and no words to say
just waiting for someone to come along and understand
say that I am with you and forever
say that i will stand beside you when your world crumbles
say that i believe every word you say
But this world is far too cruel
does the opposite of what we ask
Instead of leading to that special someone
Makes us believe that even your friends don't care
So much better, was the darkness around me
at least it hid all the lies of the world
so much better was that silent pain
at least I knew, no one would mock me
"I care", is the new way to justify causing pain
and if you want to make someone feel guilty just say, "you don't tell me anything
what one we have to say does not matter at all
because they think a broken heart, can't make one good call
Who should we trust, in whom should we put out faith in
when all I see are sharks
ripping you apart to the bone
until they have fed on every last bit of your innocent, blind trust
then just leave you in bits and pieces
All these things before me,,,
so much better was the darkness,,,
At least i had an excuse, that I can't see...