Letting Out our Feelings !!

Love, strong emotion, and I bet there are people right here in this forum who can write about it ;)
Express it in a way that others can feel it !! All kind of emotions attached to it ! Happiness, surprise, Sadness !!

So I would be Glad to share some of my silly "poems" (if you can call them), given that there are others like me here :)

so, anyone willing to do that ?

share and let things out in a way that makes us feel better !!!

Guess am the first one :P

so this is a bit silly, but hey, i'm no writer ;)


How does it feel, where there's a feeling inside you,
But you aren't able to say it..

A volcano of thoughts erupting inside you,
But you are't able to say it...

When people you trust, betray you,
But you aren't able to say it..

When your own friends, play you..
But you aren't able to say it..

When you care for someone more than your life,
But you aren't able to say it..

When the only words you want to say are " I Love You",
But you aren't able to say it...

Hello poet!

Here's mine..

An angel watching over me
its daddy

An angel touching me
its mummy

An angel caring for me
its god

An angel thinking of me
its foe

~love

okk guess you've learn some new things !!

sad ones too !!

[Heaven]

I'm not a poet and I have never written one, but this is what I have felt,

My soul recognize someone without even knowing each other, in the breezy air I feel love and peace floating all over me. Love is in the air! My heart expands, I feel happy and its calling out for love. Oh how great its to feel this thing call love.

Then I feel fear, fear to lose, fear to love, fear to be alone, fear to not be love, fear to be rejected. Fear is what prevents you from loving and disables you from loving.

Then when its gone, my heart shatters into pieces. Love is what keeps you sane!

That's sad!!
and words paint a portrait , of whats going on inside a person !
Love is the one thing that can make us do anything, anything at all !! but why do we have to stay focused on the part that hurts !
There are a lot of things that change a person, but Love is the only thing that changes someone into someone better !! or bitter !!
But you already know that !!

Love is what makes life worth living !! ;) so don't give up and don't be afraid !! ever !

[Heaven]

Originally Posted by Karny13

That's sad!!
and words paint a portrait , of whats going on inside a person !
Love is the one thing that can make us do anything, anything at all !! but why do we have to stay focused on the part that hurts !
There are a lot of things that change a person, but Love is the only thing that changes someone into someone better !! or bitter !!
But you already know that !!

Love is what makes life worth living !! ;) so don't give up and don't be afraid !! ever !

I agree with you Love IS what makes life worth living! Who doesn't love to be love!? But, sometimes love can bring fear, cause love is something that no one wants to lose, but you want to gain more of it. Its pretty interesting what you mention cause I didn't realized that I portrait sadness and fear, I just wrote what I had in my heart at that moment, without thinking. I guess I do have to learn to not be afraid.

[Heaven]

Do you see what your poem portraits, Karny13?

and well i guess its time to post another poem here :P

and deyheaven, i guess what i wrote was about fear too :P was an old one though :)

lets see what you say about this one !



Can’t spend a single moment without wetting my eye,
You’re not with me, but in my thoughts you always lie...

Since you have gone every second is hell,
So much loneliness, so much pain in my hearts cell...

Every sound, every move, anything thing i go through,
Every second that passes by reminds me of you...

The moments we spent, the memories we shared,
The silence we enjoyed shows how much we cared...

Your enchantingly sweet voice, keeps ringing in my ears,
Everything you said, every single thing i still hear...

You taught me how to care, how life isn't always fair,
You taught me how to love, even if it wasn't sometimes there...

But since you have gone, i don't know what love is....
Is it the way i remember you,
Or is it the thing that makes me cry,
Is it something that am living for,
Or is it something that isn't letting me die....

Without you there are no laughs, so smiles, no sense,
Without you there's no one who comes to my defense,
Without you there's no happiness, no joy, no hope,
Without you am not me, just too much to cope....

I know you are somewhere, looking at me,
So helpless, so upset at what you see...

How else did you expect me to live without a heart?
A heart that i gave you, with a promise to never part...

Look at what i am, torn apart from you,
Longing to hear your voice, to give me some clue,
Wanting desperately to say that I love you,
Waiting that any moment i will hear your voice,

Ringing in my ears, saying I love you too...

Guess not :P mind letting me know ?