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Old 18-04-2019, 04:28 AM
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Sun released ice spring sips
A snowy owls feather swims silently away
Robins return looking for worms


I quote myself "revised" because this is figured is the spirit of Haiku.


Sun melting ice spring sips
A White snowy owl feather floats away
Crows returning cawing for home

Haiku is like describing your day in 3 words and capturing the spirit all the same.
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