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Old 23-08-2021, 09:28 AM
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Originally Posted by Unseeking Seeker
End rhyme in first quatrain … alternate rhyming sequence a-b-a-b


I seriously believed I had it.

Can you rewrite that last one I wrote so I can visually see again what I’ve missed.

Graciously thankful..
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