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It would be a healthy thing if all broken relationships and hearts led to the insightful self loving-care attitude developed here. I like the progression and the layout. Very effective poem. Hahahahah... If I don't sound like a real critic. Now here comes the living, breathing emotion observer... The use of the path of broken glass at all and to begin and end, really punched this poem to super visual. Good one.
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There is much to be learned. Stick with me kid. Let's make it playful." My Guide
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