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Old 18-04-2019, 11:20 PM
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Looks OK to me Realm ki, it's not just the word count that matters, syllables.

Syl-la-ble counts three
Got it for this makes sev-en?
One two three four more....



Ta da ta da da
Da da ta da da da ta
Ta da da da ta.

Have-ing neu-ral mind
Tak-ing all the help I can
Show me the path home


But please not your vowels.
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