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Originally Posted by Nowayout
I quote myself "revised" because this is figured is the spirit of Haiku.
Sun melting ice spring sips
A White snowy owl feather floats away
Crows returning cawing for home
Haiku is like describing your day in 3 words and capturing the spirit all the same.
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Nice, now try to fit all that into 5, 7, 5 syllable rule.