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Old 06-12-2021, 09:51 PM
Navenanthen Navenanthen is offline
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Originally Posted by Unseeking Seeker
We’ve got to look at the syllables (not words) … the 4th syllable of the 1st line … it must be the same as the 3rd syllable of the second line as also 2nd syllable of third line.

This is a compact form but tricky

Tricky, indeed. It tripped me up. :)

How about this?

Jazz from the caves
Modern days slave
Dance chains away

Last edited by Navenanthen : 07-12-2021 at 01:16 AM.
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