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Old 06-12-2021, 02:09 AM
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Originally Posted by Navenanthen
Jazz from the caves
Modern-day slaves
Dance chains away

We’ve got to look at the syllables (not words) … the 4th syllable of the 1st line … it must be the same as the 3rd syllable of the second line as also 2nd syllable of third line.

This is a compact form but tricky
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