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Originally Posted by Realm Ki
Trying to rewrite a short poem I just posted:
Floating now
Hands in cherry blossom trees
Ground never leaves me.
(Oh now I got confused by the japanes way of counting 'word sounds' rather than syllables... Fe-lo-ting Ne-ow...  - and counted that way ONLY in the first line, hahah oh fun and random, sorry) |
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5-7-5
Keep Haiku simple
Freezing turbid thought spindle
Our light rekindle
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