Looks OK to me Realm ki, it's not just the word count that matters, syllables.
Syl-la-ble counts three
Got it for this makes sev-en?
One two three four more....
Ta da ta da da
Da da ta da da da ta
Ta da da da ta.
Have-ing neu-ral mind
Tak-ing all the help I can
Show me the path home
But please not your vowels.