Quietus
8-6-8-6 syllable count in rhyme abab +
6-6-6 syllable count tercet ccc + equal syllable couplet using refrain from first line, as last line of the poem Refrain is also the poem title I call this format Quietus. Look forward to contributions! |
First things first
first things first, we quieten heart melding our mind therein all souls be one, none stand apart as bliss throbs on our skin all we do, is be still shaped upon the anvil surrendered to Gods will quenching thirst first things first |
Galloping thought
Galloping thought, self-made prison Fears and desires seduce Inducing against soul treason Free is joyous recluse Wary of ego glue Each moment we renew Early morn pristine dew Bliss mist not caught Galloping thought |
My brain hurts to do this prose game
It’s like twisting a cork Inside my brain in time with trains Where nothing remain s Weary is the strain Tormenting my domain I’ll get over it with pain! (What’s next??) |
@ JustBe … there’s a refrain too as end line, besides first quatrain following an abab end rhyme.
Let’s say, your poem title is ‘my brain hurts’ 3 syllables, as refrain from first line, the concluding lines could be - thought forms spurt my brain hurts |
Laugh or cry
Laugh or cry, the sun will yet rise Oh, why does heart contract Does not each breath usher surprise Soul eternal, a fact Let’s then cut to the chase Choose open arm embrace Imbibing divine grace Fear decry Laugh or cry |
Ok I see now.
I think! |
Bliss or kiss in the misty twist
Climb or fall, do we stall Relish the relish on my toast There is a place to float So settle in this boat Gently lay down your coat Feel the ocean ripples It’s a dream Bliss or kiss (I thought I’d do a practice run see if my runs are right? ) |
JustBe … Perfecto! :)
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Fear transcendence
Fear transcendence sets our soul free Heart lets go off desire Devoid of lust, hate and envy Love for love does aspire Vibrancy, by bliss buoyed No longer by life toyed Or by ego decoyed Divine parlance Fear transcendence |
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