save by crucifixion, how may we rise ~
escaping the ego spawned web of lies
Enabled by divine love magnetism warm ~
Allow love and light to permeate our form
By environment hypnotised
Unconscious minds have no free will
Likewise for monks in quietude
Who have chosen to remain still
Haven´t read that much of your poems (i believe you have hundreds...or maybe much more?), but from what i have read i get the feeling you live and breathe words, rhyme and sometimes even form...? You get inspiration very easily?
Thanks irisa ~ yes, thoughts come in as poetic vibrations mostly. I don’t know how it came about.
I picked up a few poetry forms from another site, poetrysoup.com. Before that, I had no idea about syllables count, exact vs near rhymes and other poetry tools. I still do not understand what iambic pentameter is, as also other nuances of soft vs hard words as end rhymes, apt use of alliteration, show vs tell subtleties etc and of course, compared to others, my vocabulary level is far lower.
iambic pentameter?!...never heard of
How can you say your vocabulary level is far lower?
From what i´ve read till now my thought was actually that you have a pretty high level vocabulary..:confused:
Heart holds steady love’s bliss flame,
being our soul’s claim to fame,
until we so be to become,
one with beat of the cosmic drum.
If there be no creative urge ~
How will heart feel bliss rapture surge
Oh hermit, our eye cannot be single ~
unless polarities within mingle
Inspired by words of Swami Yukteswar Giri
The presence of form in any domain ~
Signals unfulfilled desire, as heart’s stain
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