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Unseeking Seeker 04-08-2023 01:38 AM

save by crucifixion, how may we rise ~
escaping the ego spawned web of lies

Unseeking Seeker 05-08-2023 12:48 AM

Enabled by divine love magnetism warm ~
Allow love and light to permeate our form

Unseeking Seeker 06-08-2023 02:01 AM

By environment hypnotised
Unconscious minds have no free will
Likewise for monks in quietude
Who have chosen to remain still

irisa 06-08-2023 10:46 AM

Nice!

Haven´t read that much of your poems (i believe you have hundreds...or maybe much more?), but from what i have read i get the feeling you live and breathe words, rhyme and sometimes even form...? You get inspiration very easily?

Unseeking Seeker 06-08-2023 12:43 PM

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Originally Posted by irisa
Nice!

Haven´t read that much of your poems (i believe you have hundreds...or maybe much more?), but from what i have read i get the feeling you live and breathe words, rhyme and sometimes even form...? You get inspiration very easily?


Thanks irisa ~ yes, thoughts come in as poetic vibrations mostly. I don’t know how it came about.

I picked up a few poetry forms from another site, poetrysoup.com. Before that, I had no idea about syllables count, exact vs near rhymes and other poetry tools. I still do not understand what iambic pentameter is, as also other nuances of soft vs hard words as end rhymes, apt use of alliteration, show vs tell subtleties etc and of course, compared to others, my vocabulary level is far lower.

irisa 06-08-2023 05:01 PM

iambic pentameter?!...never heard of

How can you say your vocabulary level is far lower?

From what i´ve read till now my thought was actually that you have a pretty high level vocabulary..:confused:

Unseeking Seeker 07-08-2023 12:08 AM

Heart holds steady love’s bliss flame,
being our soul’s claim to fame,
until we so be to become,
one with beat of the cosmic drum.

Unseeking Seeker 08-08-2023 12:11 AM

If there be no creative urge ~
How will heart feel bliss rapture surge

Unseeking Seeker 09-08-2023 02:25 AM

Oh hermit, our eye cannot be single ~
unless polarities within mingle

Unseeking Seeker 10-08-2023 12:43 AM

Inspired by words of Swami Yukteswar Giri

The presence of form in any domain ~
Signals unfulfilled desire, as heart’s stain


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