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JustBe 24-08-2021 05:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unseeking Seeker
JustBe … do a syllable check!



Your like the most annoyingly persistent and kind grade six teacher who’s determined to get her pupils across the line for the next big step in life..lol


Far out!

Your onto it.

I can’t believe I did it again!

Ok..copy paste fix it this time!

JustBe 24-08-2021 05:29 AM

Sticking to the format with heart
Amazing how your brain
Will twist it’s own domain and spark
Yet it’s all good retrain

An upside down
Round and a round
Prose will be found

Gets me through
Sticking to...

Unseeking Seeker 24-08-2021 06:42 AM

Ah, alas, the tercet must have 6 syllables per line :)

Unseeking Seeker 24-08-2021 06:44 AM

Maya veil
 

Maya veil that conceals our light
Our souls limitation
Presence yet discerns wrong from right
Choosing love vibration

Granted on earth, free will
Each impulse we distil
Till bliss does overspill

Holy grail
Maya veil

JustBe 24-08-2021 08:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unseeking Seeker

Maya veil that conceals our light

Till bliss does overspill

Maya veil

I’m very close to calling your first line as lacking one syllable
But then I thought he is safe!

I’m now trying to call you out as to not own my errors..haha

Seriously I’m going for it again..watch me!

Stillness be all encompassing
Sunset igniting pink
My heart sinks into love pumping
Joyous love, nature’s wink

Darkened clouds cannot woe
This moment all aglow
Creation As she sows

Can you see
Stillness be

Unseeking Seeker 24-08-2021 11:01 AM

@ JustBe … (thunderous applause)

I check syllable count on poetrysoup.com, so am unlikely to err

JustBe 24-08-2021 11:32 AM

Omg your such a legend dedicated to my cause.. haha

(You cheat, I rack my brain��)

Unseeking Seeker 24-08-2021 12:52 PM

Spoilt for choice
 

Spoilt for choice, engulfed by desire
We lose sense of balance
Fleeting goals for which we aspire
Corrupts our innocence

The welcome mat is laid
Bliss within is readymade
If ego goodbye bade

Lost our voice
Spoilt for choice

Unseeking Seeker 25-08-2021 02:09 AM

Goalposts shift
 

Goalposts shift, as we chase rainbows
Bemused by our own mind
Moment to moment, hunger grows
Until with love aligned

Trauma bonding with lust
Choosing pathways unjust
Love reservoir goes bust

Soul adrift
Goalposts shift

Unseeking Seeker 25-08-2021 03:46 AM

We rise if we choose
 

We rise if we choose, by free will
Becoming self-aware
Next, each thought, mindfully distil
Side stepping ego snare

Time stretched stillness, quiet
No ego spawned riot
Cravings on a diet

There is no excuse
We rise if we choose


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