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Goody! Our perfection takes diligence With focus and practice As co operation it serves Our limitless being We come into our own We are never alone Perfection dances one In unison Our perfection |
Now all that’s left is first quatrain end rhyme abab :)
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What??? What have I missed this time?? Lol |
Glisten
Glisten, begs our soul, it’s dark here Shed erst cravings savage Let thunderous bliss, each pore spear Drop ego spawned baggage In stillness and silence Spake voice of innocence Dwell in luminescence Listen Glisten |
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End rhyme in first quatrain … alternate rhyming sequence a-b-a-b |
Day and night
Day and night, God search our focus Fears and desires recede We waver not from love locus Our will to divine cede No secrets to ferret Judge not fault or merit Climbing to the summit Bliss delight Day and night |
Jesus Saves
Lord of the starfields heavens glory Gives way to our soul's story Jesus walked on dirty waters For the sake of our disorders He did withstand the current As the devil churned deep Within depts of our torrent Jesus saved The drowning |
@ Nowayout … beautiful! Not quite the format but who cares? Thanks for sharing!
Quietus form First stanza is a quatrain 8-6-8-6 syllable in end rhyme abab + Followed by 6-6-6 syllable tercet end rhyme ccc + Concluded by an equal syllable couplet using refrain from first line, as last line of the poem Refrain is also the poem title |
Silent thunder
Silent thunder vibrates within Each node of form aglow Magnetic rapture does heighten In tranquil stillness slow Let love pulsations rise Lower mind, vaporise Divine soul, realise Blissful wonder Silent thunder |
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I seriously believed I had it. Can you rewrite that last one I wrote so I can visually see again what I’ve missed. Graciously thankful.. |
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