Than-Bauk
3 lines, 4 syllables each,
rhyme 1st line 4th syllable with 2nd line 3rd syllable with 3rd line 2nd syllable Gives Haiku a run for its money, eh? |
Actor on stage
an old adage world a stage strange with age we know |
Fear is a blockage
bliss ignition when we shun fear bright sunlight here |
Jazz from the caves
Modern-day slaves Dance chains away |
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:smile: We’ve got to look at the syllables (not words) … the 4th syllable of the 1st line … it must be the same as the 3rd syllable of the second line as also 2nd syllable of third line. This is a compact form but tricky |
Where lies midpoint of rapture
we weigh and size joy surprising no wiser now |
How still is our stillness
graded silence it’s fragrance love we sense bliss throb |
Throttling love
when ego seeks higher peaks here love speaks no more |
Light beams through me
Some light tea now Dreamed three dreams wow |
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Tricky, indeed. It tripped me up. :) How about this? Jazz from the caves Modern days slave Dance chains away |
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