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Old 09-01-2020, 05:15 PM
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Towards the Close of Day

Lazy sentinels
and long bearded ones
At evening time
In a forest gliding to
Its slumber
in the dying heat of day
burnt umber
growing dark
Branches like frozen dancers
Show the ghostly heart
Of what their lives once were
The answers are dying down
In a ring of hollow
A solitary call is no more
The solitary flight dead and gone
And how can this peace
Be captured ..
Control it not for you never can
And won’t ..
The caravan of night moves over
A rolling thunder till it is no
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Old 10-01-2020, 03:52 AM
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Beautiful!

Even as darkness does mind quieten
Invisible magnetism within does heighten
Love does love spawn
Bubbling as bliss when comes a new dawn

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Old 10-01-2020, 04:51 AM
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This place is coming alive
The camaraderie
The darkness lifting from my eyes...

Thank you Joe for your wisdom and insights.
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Old 11-01-2020, 08:38 AM
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Beautiful!

Even as darkness does mind quieten
Invisible magnetism within does heighten
Love does love spawn
Bubbling as bliss when comes a new dawn

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Very nice verse. There was a line from a song by a pop band called Oasis which said " Take me to the place where you go where nobody knows if it's night or day." Your verse reminded me of this line. I suppose we could also say it's at once night, and its at once day, simultaneously and neither and each. That's me trying to be philosophical again ! thanks.
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The Frost performs its secret ministry,Unhelped by any wind. Samuel Taylor Coleridge

And you won't find that Love comes easy but that Love is always right.So even when the dark clouds gather you will be the light.

All Intellect falls prey to Love's Glory ! Rumi

He Made the Lock, He also Made the Key ! Rumi
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Old 11-01-2020, 08:39 AM
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This place is coming alive
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Thank you Joe for your wisdom and insights.

Aha a glimpse of insight or two ! Thanks for reading and sharing my friend.
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He Made the Lock, He also Made the Key ! Rumi
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Old 12-01-2020, 09:32 PM
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Good to see the creative sparks still flowing in you young man!! ;)
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Old 15-01-2020, 06:59 PM
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Good to see the creative sparks still flowing in you young man!! ;)


I absolutely thought i was hallucinating when i saw your comment, Loopy the Lucid one,my goodness, what a beautiful surprise to see you again !!!!!!! Aint nobody got time for that !!!! Flip sakes where ya been ? any good stuff happening for you with the creativity thing a majiggy ?? how's the kids ??
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The Frost performs its secret ministry,Unhelped by any wind. Samuel Taylor Coleridge

And you won't find that Love comes easy but that Love is always right.So even when the dark clouds gather you will be the light.

All Intellect falls prey to Love's Glory ! Rumi

He Made the Lock, He also Made the Key ! Rumi
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Old 16-01-2020, 09:18 PM
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HAhaha and good to see you to lovely Been agessssssss!!! We will have to catch up in chat soon, Cause we do have time for that! lol Always makes me smile!! What time zone you in these days? and yeh ive done an ickle bit of writing you could say! Actually got brave enough to do some spoken word poetry at a little theater, once!! Not really my bag but good experience! Your writings evolved alot, great to read hun, lets catch up soon, who else is about from the good old days here still?? Big hugs x
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Old 18-01-2020, 03:16 PM
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HAhaha and good to see you to lovely Been agessssssss!!! We will have to catch up in chat soon, Cause we do have time for that! lol Always makes me smile!! What time zone you in these days? and yeh ive done an ickle bit of writing you could say! Actually got brave enough to do some spoken word poetry at a little theater, once!! Not really my bag but good experience! Your writings evolved alot, great to read hun, lets catch up soon, who else is about from the good old days here still?? Big hugs x

So glad you still have faith and a connection in the spoken and written word so fantastic ! I'll give up trying to write verse when it gives me up. I'm still in The Land of Ireland or as Donovan might say the Land of Eire, "And then one day they met again in a house in the land of Eire" ..a line from his song The Little Tin Soldier " https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EbXepo2Efp8....Hey aint it crazy there is no one left really lolol *** ...hahahaha makes me laugh though ...at least not on Sf chat everybody has left town. Ah well. God it used to be pretty intense remember , Loveyduck, Makoiyi, actually we had a chat on the phone the otherday so we are still in contact but where the flip did they all go lol ..probably some crazy room tucked away in the cyber space room ...Hey good stuff loopy, such a nice surprise to see you ..maybe we can storm chat one of these days and show them what it used to be like...we'll get the rave going again lol...here is a clip to consider poor theresa mannion an infamous newscaster on irish tv ...man !

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vUoM6deFWlU
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The Frost performs its secret ministry,Unhelped by any wind. Samuel Taylor Coleridge

And you won't find that Love comes easy but that Love is always right.So even when the dark clouds gather you will be the light.

All Intellect falls prey to Love's Glory ! Rumi

He Made the Lock, He also Made the Key ! Rumi
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