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Old 24-04-2017, 03:20 AM
Bubbles235 Bubbles235 is offline
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War

I wrote this poem called War. Please tell me what you think!! :)




Born a child
Of the war
Rampant in my homeland

With my last breath
My vision is overtook
By the endless sea
Of the blue sky
In front of me
Where I can only see
All the people who mattered
So much to me

With my last breath
The hate against my enemy
Is gone in the
Magnificence of the blue sky

I know
That the God inside
Is too grand
To be separated
By turmoils
Conflict and rancor
Against my brotherhood
Called mankind

Forgive me
My God, and my enemies
For the wounds I have
Inflicted upon you
On the battlefield

Be still
And know that the promise
Of eternal peace
Is a long one
But forever guaranteed
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Old 24-04-2017, 11:44 PM
Miss Hepburn Miss Hepburn is offline
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I liked it very much.
War as a theme?
You might like the movie 'Testament of Youth'...very moving.
Alicia Vikander...and oh, the music.
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Old 04-02-2018, 05:06 AM
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Heartbreaking, sad and true.

Lovely, as always.

Thank you Bubbles.
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