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Old 21-07-2018, 06:24 AM
Joe Mc Joe Mc is offline
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That Doorway

Through the secret door
there will be no more ending
no more waiting
Around
I wont try to put you
back into my world view
When i get there
See your faults against my
fancy judgemental windows
That cost me the earth to
install
Through the door there is a beginning
in sight
Something you always knew
A knowing that goes from day to day
sometimes unrecognised
For just in life
As it is with death
We can take the steps
as they are
moving away along
by coastal towns shelves
and headlands
revisiting a childhood or
family destination ?
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Old 21-07-2018, 06:59 PM
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Old 24-07-2018, 08:07 AM
weareunity weareunity is offline
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Hello Joe. I enjoyed your poem Joe, lots packed in there I believe, and flowing into my imagination from yours, but not forced.

The lines

"I won't try to put you back into my world view
When I get there
See your faults against my fancy judgemental windows
That cost me the earth to install"---

Observation/thought nicely shared Imo.

And this Earth: Robust yet fragile, as industrial civilisation begins to find, at last.--as we push up against the perimeter fence demanding more.

petex
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Old 25-07-2018, 06:30 AM
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Hello Joe. I enjoyed your poem Joe, lots packed in there I believe, and flowing into my imagination from yours, but not forced.

The lines

"I won't try to put you back into my world view
When I get there
See your faults against my fancy judgemental windows
That cost me the earth to install"---

Observation/thought nicely shared Imo.

And this Earth: Robust yet fragile, as industrial civilisation begins to find, at last.--as we push up against the perimeter fence demanding more.

petex

Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed those few words. Yes those few words emerged in a minute or so (as probably shows lol) and if i may say so myself that idea about the price we pay here on earth has always been in question....the world views, the material possessions (judgemental windows) and of course in today's age as we experience a global economy, the question of sustainability is always on the agenda. Sorry i think my comment is longer than the poem itself lolol. All the best and im very flattered that you cared to comment thank you
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