A Fairy Story (based on real life)

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The indifferent eye of the of The Omnipresent looked upon a pastorial
scene. Two young girl picked their way barefoot though a gentle wood
towards a talkative stream that held conversations with itself as it
bumbled over worn smooth granite boulders.
The voices of the children were indistinquiahable from birdsong,
trilling giggles and imaginings told in an exchange of high notes.
The Observer noted their movement as it noted the movements of
everything, watching as they came to crouch beside each other
on a sun warmed rock by the edge of the stream, wiggling their fingers
in bubbling current.
From their perspective Omnipresense observed the feeling of the cold
silk ribbon of water slipping between their fingers, the damp mud
smell mixing with the updraft of water washed breeze.
The red haired girl rocked back on her butt to sit with her feet in
stream. The golden haired girl did the same. They raised their faces
to the sun like a pair of daisies.

The forest around the girls was alive with energy, life bouncing,
stretching, burrowing, twirling, twining, growing and receding.
"Look" whispered the red haired one as her attention captured
a ball of diffused green light that was jiggling around the roots of a
fern cluster, "but don't look", she whispered softer. Her companion
tilted her head and with the very edge of her eye looked where the red
haired one pointed.


Omnipresense watched as the glowing orb of dancing green light
congealed into a tiny human form held aloft by a whir of wings.
Omnipresense felt the stifled gasps of awe as the two
little girls furtively watched the fairy. They didn't realize that it
was their biased eyes that molded the flittering form from the
nebulous energy ball of life.


In that instant The Omnipresent observed it's own enlightenment.

I love this!!! Very nicely done!!! This sounds kind of how I write my stories.