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09-10-2010, 04:47 PM
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Master
Join Date: Oct 2010
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Please Write
Please Write
Why won't they tell me what's going on?
I thought our time would last, like the last line of a song.
The tears I cry go on eternally
Now I know that only time can set me free
Waiting and hoping, hoping and waiting
Why wasn't there any news?
Is it so hard to pick up a pen
Write the three words "yes its you".
cesx
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09-10-2010, 05:24 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: an alternate reality
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I can feel the heart's emotion in this one ces 
it does drive one crazy, doesn't it ?
I like these lines, I can relate to the first line of the three ~
I thought our time would last, like the last line of a song.
The tears I cry go on eternally
Now I know that only time can set me free
I hope you will continue to share your poems !
DA xx
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09-10-2010, 06:34 PM
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Master
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Thank you for your kind words. This one is many years old and its not in its original form. I have had to change some of the words around as its almost too painful to read.
The other one I shared tonight "Why" was written around the same time and really went hand in hand with this at the time. A glimpse of a moment in my past. A whisper of some of the truth with the underlying concerns rumbling on about the funeral dream I mentioned on another post. Sad and happy at the same time :( :)
thank you again. cesx
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09-10-2010, 08:24 PM
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ces, I had a feeling the two poems were connected. Thank you for sharing.
DA xx
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♥ love always ♥
Expect Miracles !
Sometimes in the winds of change ~ we find our true direction
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