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Old 25-07-2017, 04:10 AM
Nowayout Nowayout is offline
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Swim With Me

We have fingers
If we had flippers
It would change...
Our nature

Big brains with flippers
Also, Ponder
The depths...
That we are

Who is superior
The ones with flippers
Or the ones with
Fingers?

When the floods
Come
As they will
Learn once again

How to swim.


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Old 25-07-2017, 04:33 AM
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Fish

There's something
about your poem
that I can't just put
my finger on...hmm.

But I've always loved to swim.

I think I could sound off like a seal, though...
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Old 25-07-2017, 04:39 AM
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Row row row your boat...
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Old 27-07-2017, 08:27 PM
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I loved it!
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Old 28-07-2017, 04:42 AM
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Thank you...

I pray you don't have to drown with me...

But I'm not in charge...
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