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Old 22-02-2017, 08:57 PM
weareunity weareunity is offline
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Beyond Belief

We may all be together
In the place beyond belief
Where we are all life flowing
And neither time nor death are thief.
Where our chosen place of worship
Offers food along the way
To where the love of love is in the air
And just breathing is to pray.
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Oh take me there!-Is it far ?
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It is here my child, where we are.
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This is a version of words which first came to me many years ago, and I am sure that similar thoughts have entered your minds also. I hope I do them all justice. xxpete.
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Old 25-02-2017, 01:27 PM
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Very nice!
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Old 27-02-2017, 02:10 PM
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Thanks Miss Hepburn. I don't think my poems have much literary merit. I often use poems -even if they are not great poetry-as a way of communicating thoughts and ideas in a very compact format. All the best.pete
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Old 22-10-2017, 02:08 AM
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Originally Posted by weareunity
We may all be together
In the place beyond belief
Where we are all life flowing
And neither time nor death are thief.
Where our chosen place of worship
Offers food along the way
To where the love of love is in the air
And just breathing is to pray.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Oh take me there!-Is it far ?
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
It is here my child, where we are.
--------------------------------------

This is a version of words which first came to me many years ago, and I am sure that similar thoughts have entered your minds also. I hope I do them all justice. xxpete.

This is a clever poem, weareunity. I especially enjoyed these ideas, "where the love of love is in the air and just breathing is to pray." Timeless beauty in your verse!
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Old 22-10-2017, 01:25 PM
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Originally Posted by weareunity
We may all be together
In the place beyond belief
Where we are all life flowing
And neither time nor death are thief.
Where our chosen place of worship
Offers food along the way
To where the love of love is in the air
And just breathing is to pray.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Oh take me there!-Is it far ?
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
It is here my child, where we are.
--------------------------------------

This is a version of words which first came to me many years ago, and I am sure that similar thoughts have entered your minds also. I hope I do them all justice. xxpete.

Weareunity, this verse of yours is filled with profound meaning and has an eloquent rhythm and flow. As Starflower said, it is cleverly written.
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