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19-07-2012, 11:42 AM
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Feather and the Arrow
Feather and the Arrow
Leave the page open
Let the thoughts flow
So inspired yet
Too many thoughts to go
Amazed at the beauty
Such courage over the fragility
Determination over anxiety
Where wisdom meets naivety
A pause, a stumble
My words I seek
A thought a smile
My mind wonders
For a while
I am feather in the wind
She is the arrow with direction
Envious in the difference
In awe I stand still
Many little thoughts
Such little words
attempting to capture
images of something so deep
so beautiful
Keep it simple
not blessed with the agility
Not impressed with the precision
My words are
like a feather in the wind
Heart and mind
sometimes scattered
blown by emotion
sometimes moving
sometimes still
the arrow has far to go
Slices through the emotion in the air
it carries her
in her direction
with intent
Such beauty in action
El Barto / Zaphod
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19-07-2012, 12:59 PM
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Wow, I really like this one !! Impressive !
I am especially drawn to these verses ~
" My words are
like a feather in the wind
Heart and mind
sometimes scattered
blown by emotion
sometimes moving
sometimes still
the arrow has far to go
Slices through the emotion in the air
it carries her
in her direction
with intent
Such beauty in action "
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Sometimes in the winds of change ~ we find our true direction
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19-07-2012, 01:06 PM
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Originally Posted by Dream Angel
Wow, I really like this one !! Impressive !
I am especially drawn to these verses ~
" My words are
like a feather in the wind
Heart and mind
sometimes scattered
blown by emotion
sometimes moving
sometimes still
the arrow has far to go
Slices through the emotion in the air
it carries her
in her direction
with intent
Such beauty in action "
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Thank you , I wrote that like 4 weeks ago. Inspired by someone that has caught my attention in a deep way....
You know that feeling when you meet someone and you kinda feel you know they will go far...
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19-07-2012, 01:20 PM
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I would say this person has definitely caught your attention to be the motivation for such inspiration
I have a feeling, we will be seeing more of your inspirational poetry
oh, and I forgot to tell you ~ I also like your signature line
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♥ love always ♥
Expect Miracles !
Sometimes in the winds of change ~ we find our true direction
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19-07-2012, 02:14 PM
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Originally Posted by Dream Angel
I would say this person has definitely caught your attention to be the motivation for such inspiration
I have a feeling, we will be seeing more of your inspirational poetry
oh, and I forgot to tell you ~ I also like your signature line
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Thanks but i am not sure what i have left in me ... it will have to be heavy duty inspiration.
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19-07-2012, 02:26 PM
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I am sure you still have it, it might just be hiding deep inside ~
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19-07-2012, 02:32 PM
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Originally Posted by Dream Angel
I am sure you still have it, it might just be hiding deep inside ~
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I dunno I dug deep with these I feel kinda gutted out
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19-07-2012, 02:40 PM
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Originally Posted by El Barto
I dunno I dug deep with these I feel kinda gutted out
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oh my, not a good visual ... sounds like one of those poor deer hanging from a tree in hunting season.
quick, give me a different visual !
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19-07-2012, 02:48 PM
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Originally Posted by Dream Angel
oh my, not a good visual ... sounds like one of those poor deer hanging from a tree in hunting season.
quick, give me a different visual !
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You first , I am seeing deer carcasses
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19-07-2012, 02:53 PM
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you were supposed to change that visual not make it more graphic !
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