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Old 18-07-2012, 05:12 PM
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If our thoughts could speak ....

If our thoughts could speak ....

Do my thoughts travel faster
Than the spoken word ?
Can you feel my presence
Before a word is heard ?

Can you feel me close
When I am so far away ?

If my thoughts could speak
Do you wonder what they would say ?

And if your thoughts could answer
Would I hear them clearly
Or would they just wander astray ?

Do my thoughts travel faster
Than the speed of light ?
Can you hear them immediately
Or do they linger thru the night ?

Can you feel me close
When you are so far away ?

If your thoughts could speak
Would you whisper softly in my ear ?

And if my thoughts could answer
What is it you would like to hear ?

Do my thoughts travel faster
During the night or during the day ?
If you had your choice,
Do you have a preference either way ?

If our thoughts could speak …..

I wonder ……

What would they say ?


Dream Angel xx
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Old 18-07-2012, 10:23 PM
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Your poem has rythme I could almost feel it breathe and i could see it as a song :)
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Old 18-07-2012, 10:27 PM
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Thank you El Barto, are you going to put it to music for me ?
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Old 18-07-2012, 10:30 PM
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Thank you El Barto, are you going to put it to music for me ?
Maybe just the bass line ;)
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Old 18-07-2012, 10:34 PM
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bass line ? are you taking my song fishing ?
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Old 18-07-2012, 10:40 PM
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bass line ? are you taking my song fishing ?
hahah cute
no
I am better at bass than guitar :p
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Old 18-07-2012, 10:42 PM
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ok, that would have been a first, someone taking my poem fishing, lol !

I thought bass, was a guitar ? bass would be fine
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Old 18-07-2012, 10:46 PM
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ok, that would have been a first, someone taking my poem fishing, lol !

I thought bass, was a guitar ? bass would be fine
Well I am sure if you read poems to the worms to tender them up , you might get lucky at fishing ?
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Old 18-07-2012, 10:50 PM
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hmmmm, since I don't fish...

I will let you experiment........ with one of your poems ! then you can let me know ... how it goes
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Old 18-07-2012, 11:01 PM
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hmmmm, since I don't fish...

I will let you experiment........ with one of your poems ! then you can let me know ... how it goes
Umm I don't fish
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