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Old 27-06-2014, 02:18 AM
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What I meant by that is for you to write another poem that's not so simple for me to figure it out. I won't make promises that I can't keep, specially since I'm not good at writing poems. :)
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Old 27-06-2014, 06:46 AM
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another one !!

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What I meant by that is for you to write another poem that's not so simple for me to figure it out. I won't make promises that I can't keep, specially since I'm not good at writing poems. :)

ahh !!

well i can post a poem or something like that ;) try and guess thats it about :) and by the way, you'll get better once you start writing.. should have seen the first ones i wrote :P funny !!

anyway here it is...

It feels like being surrounded by darkness on a brightest day
when there are things inside and no words to say
just waiting for someone to come along and understand
say that I am with you and forever
say that i will stand beside you when your world crumbles
say that i believe every word you say


But this world is far too cruel
does the opposite of what we ask
Instead of leading to that special someone
Makes us believe that even your friends don't care


So much better, was the darkness around me
at least it hid all the lies of the world
so much better was that silent pain
at least I knew, no one would mock me


"I care", is the new way to justify causing pain
and if you want to make someone feel guilty just say, "you don't tell me anything
what one we have to say does not matter at all
because they think a broken heart, can't make one good call


Who should we trust, in whom should we put out faith in
when all I see are sharks
ripping you apart to the bone
until they have fed on every last bit of your innocent, blind trust
then just leave you in bits and pieces


All these things before me,,,
so much better was the darkness,,,
At least i had an excuse, that I can't see...
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Old 27-06-2014, 02:28 PM
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That's a good one!! writing one is like exposing my heart to the world, but I will surprise you with one!
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Old 27-06-2014, 05:01 PM
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Hey

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That's a good one!! writing one is like exposing my heart to the world, but I will surprise you with one!

Thanks :) and I would really like to read the one you are going to write :)
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Old 27-06-2014, 05:12 PM
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Its coming soon Karny!!! lol
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Old 28-06-2014, 09:09 AM
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:P

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Its coming soon Karny!!! lol

haha cant wait to read it
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Old 29-06-2014, 11:17 AM
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Hey Karny, this one is not a romantic one, but its about the love that I have for my dad. He's not doing good and my heart goes to him, I still hope he can be around for more years.

The love that I have for you is great,
I still see myself as that little girl that you took care of
I still miss you, I still want to be that little girl to be taking care of.

The thought of losing you hurts me great, I know that's life and we all have to say our goodbyes, I just want to be able to say goodbye and be able to tell you how much I loved you and how much I appreciated you as my dad. I have already lost without saying goodbye and I don't want to happen again.

I forgive you for not being a perfect father, I forgive you.
The love that I have is far stronger for me not to.
You will always be my dad and I will always be your little girl.
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Old 29-06-2014, 04:59 PM
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Hey heaven,
That was beautiful.. The love for a father is always special and I hope you'll get to spend a lot of time with your dad ! You should show this to him and I know he'll love it very much :) he should know what a caring and loving his daughter is :)
And I know it's hard to say goodbyes .. But if two people know each other so well then they already know what is going on inside one another .. Maybe it's just me but when you hug someone you love be it a father or nyone else .. There's no need for anything else .. Cause right there right then they know how much they meant to you :) just cherish the time you spend with your father and everything will turn out great :)

I really babble too much don't I :p you take care ok :) and that was lovely :)
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Old 29-06-2014, 09:42 PM
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He knows I care for him, unfortunately I can't spend time with him cause he is far away from me and he told me not to stop by yet, I wish I could! What scares me is that he's been ill and I'm afraid that if something did happened to him, I won't make it in time!

You don't babble at all!! That's why we are in this forum to babble!! This is actually fun! :)
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Old 29-06-2014, 10:06 PM
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Uhh.. wow.. haha, this thread is crazy. I'd love to join but I'm not really sure I can bring across that much enthusiasm.. plus I'm not really into anyone right now..

How about a song? This isn't for anyone particular.. has no words or anything.
This is the song which opened my heart and made me see.. the divine beauty and love in everything..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GfpLea9OurA
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