Cotton candy

[M.Tesla]

I remember my mama always used to say "I doubt it"

It sunk in

How parents can be toxic

I have to change my genetics, but it dowsnr make sense.

I dont need to do that.

I need to survive. I must.

I breathe.

Into dust oblivion

Odyssey sparks of indigo blue

Vega bond

The love that tore the world in 2

I think
I believe
I act
I begin
I become
In one
Breath
In one
Unity
In one
Faith
In one
Nature

I begin to light the sky up
From The Keys beach at night
Fireworks explode
The sky breaks into glass
Pieces plastered across the universe
Unique heaven
Soul begin to enter center

[Sapphirez]

This is lovely and evoking. sometimes fragmented poetry can seem lost, but this poem flows and makes kind sense. clearly about finding yourself. it's sweet yet is still a bit raw and slightly off-putting to evoke a response. the single line section had me breathe in and out a little special time-pausing kind of way

[M.Tesla]

Thanks sapphires. I really didn't know what I was writing about and thought it didn't make sense. I've reread it a couple times and it makes sense now.

The first part is about my upbringing

The second part is about existing on my own, without those notions of "I doubt it"

The third part is the outcome of belief