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Old 25-09-2012, 06:25 AM
Nada
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Letting Go

Letting go
When lost
Unable to continue
Have to let go
So you live
And I continue
Last words unnecessary
We need no words
See the agony
In your eyes
My weakness
As your tormentor
Unable to bear
Your despair
I let you go
So you continue
Let it go
Be free
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Old 26-09-2012, 11:41 AM
RiversLady
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Your writing is a wail of agony from the soul. Well done. Sometimes hope doesn't spring eternal in doing the right thing for a loved one.
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Old 26-09-2012, 01:35 PM
Nada
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Thanks!
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Old 26-09-2012, 02:30 PM
RiversLady
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Writing gets out the bad that needs to get out. Never stop writing your feelings. I hope to see (in a while) that you are able to find some joy in life again and express that in your work. It sounds corny, but time really does heal most wounds. Loss of a child I feel parents never get over. I hope that wasn't what you were talking about.
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Old 26-09-2012, 02:43 PM
Nada
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Quote:
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Writing gets out the bad that needs to get out. Never stop writing your feelings. I hope to see (in a while) that you are able to find some joy in life again and express that in your work. It sounds corny, but time really does heal most wounds. Loss of a child I feel parents never get over. I hope that wasn't what you were talking about.

No it wasn't but at the same time, yes it was.
It can be both since the truth is in the perception of the reader.
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