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23-08-2012, 09:12 AM
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The sound of terror
THE SOUND OF TERROR
Thunder claps, lightning strikes as I walk on hills of night
Mountains moan as huts groan but I still walk on. On… and on
Feet sore but soul strong on I go, wind whipping in my face but I
Fight back and keep my pace. Things are turning blurry now
But I do not complain and do not scowl I fall to my knees and start to crawl
I’m almost at the castle door with all my last strength I push the door and that’s
When I fall, fall my eyes close and I sleep a long peaceful sleep.
Made by Etran
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23-08-2012, 11:30 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: an alternate reality
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Nice poem Etran, thank you for sharing. Sounds like it would be a great scene for a movie.
Dream Angel xx
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23-08-2012, 11:40 PM
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Extremely nice poem, hope to read more of your poetry.
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23-08-2012, 11:41 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2010
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That is a dark and powerful poem, Etran. Did it come from a real dream you had?
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24-08-2012, 03:20 AM
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No not a dream just how I felt.
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01-12-2012, 03:48 PM
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You are adorable and admirable, I think the world definitely needs more children (and grown-ups lol) like you 
very nice poem! good flow and content, magical
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