Letting Out our Feelings !!

wow, those are a lot of reasons rosa !

and you never know who or what you fall in love with ;) i need to figure out a way to cheer you up :P a way where i don't have to send you a ticket to fly out of the country haha :P

and well i guess its time to post another poem here :P

and deyheaven, i guess what i wrote was about fear too :P was an old one though :)

lets see what you say about this one !



Can’t spend a single moment without wetting my eye,
You’re not with me, but in my thoughts you always lie...

Since you have gone every second is hell,
So much loneliness, so much pain in my hearts cell...

Every sound, every move, anything thing i go through,
Every second that passes by reminds me of you...

The moments we spent, the memories we shared,
The silence we enjoyed shows how much we cared...

Your enchantingly sweet voice, keeps ringing in my ears,
Everything you said, every single thing i still hear...

You taught me how to care, how life isn't always fair,
You taught me how to love, even if it wasn't sometimes there...

But since you have gone, i don't know what love is....
Is it the way i remember you,
Or is it the thing that makes me cry,
Is it something that am living for,
Or is it something that isn't letting me die....

Without you there are no laughs, so smiles, no sense,
Without you there's no one who comes to my defense,
Without you there's no happiness, no joy, no hope,
Without you am not me, just too much to cope....

I know you are somewhere, looking at me,
So helpless, so upset at what you see...

How else did you expect me to live without a heart?
A heart that i gave you, with a promise to never part...

Look at what i am, torn apart from you,
Longing to hear your voice, to give me some clue,
Wanting desperately to say that I love you,
Waiting that any moment i will hear your voice,

Ringing in my ears, saying I love you too...

[sea-dove]

That is a sad poem Karny. I hope you one day find that love you seek within.

[DaiBach]

Ar Lan y Môr

Beside the sea red roses growing
Beside the sea white lilies showing
Beside the sea their beauty telling
My true love sleeps within her dwelling

Beside the sea the stones lie scattered
Where tender words in love were uttered
While all around there grew the lily
And sweetest branches of rosemary

Beside the sea blue pebbles lying
Beside the sea gold flowers glowing
Beside the sea are all things fairest
Beside the sea is found my dearest

Full the sea of sand and billows
Full the egg of whites and yellows
Full the woods of leaf and flower
Full my heart of love for ever.

Fair the sun at new day’s dawning
Fair the rainbow’s colours shining
Fair the summer, fair as heaven
Fairer yet the face of Elin.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kIKnNJyLFDA

Originally Posted by sea-dove

That is a sad poem Karny. I hope you one day find that love you seek within.

Thanks sea-dove :) I hope for that too :)

[Heaven]

Originally Posted by Karny13

Guess not :P mind letting me know ?

First poem - it sounds like you keep your feelings to yourself and its hard for you to express does feelings to people.

Second poem - you miss her a lot and it broke your heart deeply, you desperately want to hear from her and can't wait for that moment. You loved her and still do!

[Heaven]

Hey Karny13, was I right? or wrong? I'm just curious to know!

Originally Posted by deyheaven1979

Hey Karny13, was I right? or wrong? I'm just curious to know!

Hey heaven
you were right for most of the part ;) I probably shouldn't write something so simple :P

[Heaven]

hahaha...... well then give me your best shot!! The second poem was pretty good thou!

Originally Posted by deyheaven1979

hahaha...... well then give me your best shot!! The second poem was pretty good thou!

Thanks

and best shot at what ? :P what your words were about ? cause you already explained them :)

The ones who fear the feeling of being in love are the ones who haven't been so lucky with it.. i've been there and i know that feeling. Afraid to let someone close in fear that we might hurt them, if not now, then later.. no matte how much we care about them !

But hey, don't stop writing ;) Its the best way to make peace with whats going on inside :) I might post another one if you tell me that you'll keep writing :P