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Old 12-02-2018, 12:30 PM
MidnightCry MidnightCry is offline
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You Were Once Around

Although I'm kind of used to
Not hearing your sound
I'm still heartbroken that you're
No longer around.

It's still your sound
I anticipate to find
Attachments of
The subconscious mind.

I stand where you did
I remember the day
You made your last sound
The life in you went away.

I'll never forget
The final rest
Time won't make me
Treasure you any less.

But now you're gone
No longer in pain
That's the only ray of sun
Through the rain.

Although I'm getting used to
Not hearing your sound
I'll never get used to the fact
You were once around.
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Old 12-02-2018, 06:26 PM
Rsandee Rsandee is offline
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Absolutely beautiful!
Take care!
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Old 13-02-2018, 12:44 AM
MidnightCry MidnightCry is offline
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Absolutely beautiful!
Take care!

Thank you so much, you too.
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Old 22-02-2018, 10:46 AM
GreenRiver GreenRiver is offline
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Love it.
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Old 22-02-2018, 12:25 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by MidnightCry
Although I'm kind of used to
Not hearing your sound
I'm still heartbroken that you're
No longer around.

It's still your sound
I anticipate to find
Attachments of
The subconscious mind.

I stand where you did
I remember the day
You made your last sound
The life in you went away.

I'll never forget
The final rest
Time won't make me
Treasure you any less.

But now you're gone
No longer in pain
That's the only ray of sun
Through the rain.

Although I'm getting used to
Not hearing your sound
I'll never get used to the fact
You were once around.

Midnight - This is beautiful! I think a lot of people can relate to this poem.
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Old 28-02-2018, 10:05 PM
MidnightCry MidnightCry is offline
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Originally Posted by GreenRiver
Love it.
Thank you!
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Old 28-02-2018, 10:06 PM
MidnightCry MidnightCry is offline
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Midnight - This is beautiful! I think a lot of people can relate to this poem.
Thank you so much.
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