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Old 18-04-2024, 07:01 AM
Joe Mc Joe Mc is offline
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Originally Posted by Realm Ki
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Drawn from source to revive us
We set Spirit free.
Never tried a haiku before - did I get it right, 5 - 7 - 5? It's not words right, its 'vowel sounds'?

Close ! Just joking of course !
There are another two forms apparently, Shenryu and Tanka, if I find
the time, I would like to explore them.

Nice Haiku btw.

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