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Old 13-04-2019, 05:46 AM
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Originally Posted by dybmh
I think that's it.

It turned out a little dark. I'm not actually that dark. I don't know why it turned out that way. But

My itention was to explore the different counter intuitive aspects of feeling homeless, wild and free.

I'm not sure I accomplished it.

it is definitely a very very rough draft.

It's special... this won't be posted anywhere else.

Thank you for reading it.

Your Friend,

Daniel

I often think that my work is quite dark as well... That is because of some perceptions I have of this forum where I fool myself into thinking its all meant to be love and light and rainbows lol... A lot of the journey ain't all rainbows and it's just as valid.
Personally I did not find your last piece of writing to be all that dark.
The most useful writing is often an organic process - it is good at times to just let it unfold as its meant to.
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